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La Luna My sick sentences.
The boat sat on the water. The stars were bright. It was quiet.
(The sick sentence is at the top of this.And at the bottem of this is my sentence)
Calmly the tiny boat sat on the dark icy water. The stars were twinkling as bright as a light. It was silent.
My Matariki Art.
These are the steps on how I made My Matariki Art
- we made silhouetts of famous landscape in Auckland. (tamaki makaurau)
- pastel backround.
- stencil and paint. we used the paint with a tooth brush to flick it on the backround
I really liked the pastel backround part because it really made my hands dirty and I wanted to leave my hands dirty but I had to wash my hands. The things that I didn’t like was none of it there were all fun to do
Mars Patel Ponder 10
I like how it was scary and there was danger in it.
I think watching mars patel was really cool.
I wasn’t exepecting that it will be scary i thought it will just be normal.
notice and wonder
I notice there is a girl that is rock climbing.
I wonder if she is having fun.
I think this will be fun but it will also be scary.
I wonder what place this girl is at.
Notice & Wonder.
I notice there are a lot of people on the train.
I wonder if someone is going to fall.
I notice some people are standing in front of the train.
I wonder if the people that are standing in front of the train will want to hop on.
I wonder what country this is.
My metaphor
We have learning about metaphors unlike similes , a metaphor doesn’t use ”like or as.
it compares two diffrent things.
Here is my metaphor. Lola is a scared bubble.
I used this metaphor because when you are in a astronaut suit you float like a bubble.
Let’s talk about space!
I have been learning about diffrent kinds of the texts.